Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Nov 25, 2007 13:19:51 GMT -5
This is my latest rp from another fed which is promo based and I would like your thoughts and opinions and ways I can improve please?
Before his match with Rey Mysterio, Chris Masters' Theme booms througout the arena as "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters makes his way to the ring. After about 30 seconds of his music playing Masters eventually appears through the curtain to a chorus of boos and many chants of "You Suck" and various other words that sound something like a**hole and "Masterb*te."
Joey Styles
Hello!! And welcome to another edition of Extreme Championship Wrestling, live on Sci-Fi and what a way to kick off the show. The self proclaimed "Masterpiece" Chris Masters and obviously the crowd here in attendance doesn't think along the same lines as Masters does.
Tazz
And obviously the people in attendance and blind and stupid if they don't agree with "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters. Just look at the guy!! He is a real specimen and later on tonight he goes one on one against the Master of the 619, Rey Mysterio.
Joey Styles
Yeah, you brought up the person who Masters who will indeed be facing later on tonight, The firecracker known as Rey Mysterio, who came back to ECW last week and all he was out here for was to say hi to the fans but for some reason Chris Masters took it upon himself to interrupt and beat the hell out of the man!!
Tazz
Yeah but Mysterio goaded Masters into doing that. You have to remember it was Mysterio who told Chris to "Bring it on" so there you go. Mysterio should have let Masters have his say and no harm would have come to Rey.
Joey Styles
What the hell are you talking about Tazz?? Are you blind? You saw what happened last week and you are actually defending "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters? Oh my god! He made fun of Mysterio's size and I can't blame the guy for wanting to shut Masters mouth once and for all.
Chris Masters steps on the ramp and does his various taunts before walking to the ring with a smirk on his face and also he lifts his left arm up in the air and points it to the ceiling while the fans still boo the hell out of him. When Chris eventually reaches the foot of the ring, he turns left and walks up the steel steps and then he walks across the apron until he gets to the middle of it and then he steps in the ring. Masters then goes over to the other side of the ring and asks for a mic and after a moment Justin Roberts stands up and walks up the other steel steps and hands his mic to Chris Masters. Chris Masters clears his throat before raising the microphone and starts talking.
Chris Masters
How are you idiots doing tonight? Huh? Oh I am fantastic thanks for asking. I am on top of the world and couldn't be any better. You know after that match I had with Finlay, which I won of course, I heard some rambling from a certain someone called Rey Mysterio.
*The Crowd cheers for Rey Mysterio*
Chris Masters
Well, there's a surprise!! You dumba**es like the guy so that makes him a s*ckup to you idiots. Give me a break. Why would you cheer for a tiny little insignificant piece of crap!! Anyway as I was saying, after my match I heard the guy talking about how it was good to be back in ECW and I thought to myself "What the f*ck is this guy on about? He thinks it good to be in ECW? What a dumba**!." So then I decided to go and give him a piece of my mind and kick his sorry a**.
Joey Styles
Yeah, you beat a much smaller man than yourself, you good for nothing coward!! And you don't deserve to be in Extreme Championship Wrestling for one you idiot. At least Mysterio has respect for ECW unlike you because all you care about is yourself.
Tazz
And the award for the biggest moaning and complaining b*tch in all the WWE, goes to Joey Styles!!! Just shut up Styles, you are really p*ssing me off again, which you do every week. Just shut your cake hole and listen to "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters before I kick your sorry a** into the middle of next week!!
Chris Masters
Oh and he didn't like ii so he asked the General Manager for a match tonight, between the two of us. I am glad he did because it gives me a chance to put him out of ECW and end his pathetic career. And also put him out of his misery, so that he will never, ever think that he can take on"The Masterpiece" Chris Masters ever again. Oh yeah I have this piece of footage of last week proving my dominance over Rey Mysterio, for those who didn't see it last week. Roll the footage!!!
*The footage is shown of Mysterio going for the West Coast Pop and Masters ducking and cracking Rey in the leg with the Steel Chair. Then is shows Chris Masters picking Rey Mysterio up off his feet and locking in the Master Lock and throwing Mysterio to the mat. Lastly it shows Chris taunting Mysterio and talking trash to the man.*
Joey Styles
What a surprise, Masters didn't show the part where Rey Mysterio getting the upper hand but you wouldn't expect a man with this much arrogance and c*ckyness to actually show the footage.
Tazz
Look, all Masters is doing is proving a point to everyone in the back, in the Locker Room and everyone watching at home, all around the world. I wouldn't expect you to understand that Joey.
Chris Masters
Finally I would like to say I am not going to do The Master Lock challenge anymore because whats the point of it? No-one has and no-one ever will break the Master Lock so I am not wasting my time in even trying to so on that note. I say goodbye you pathtic losers because I have to get ready for my match.
Masters hands the mic back to Justin Roberts and climbs out of the ring and he heads backstage with the smirk back on his face and the crowd booing more than ever because of what Masters has just said and because they hate his guts and its not surprising that they do, who wouldn't?
Before his match with Rey Mysterio, Chris Masters' Theme booms througout the arena as "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters makes his way to the ring. After about 30 seconds of his music playing Masters eventually appears through the curtain to a chorus of boos and many chants of "You Suck" and various other words that sound something like a**hole and "Masterb*te."
Joey Styles
Hello!! And welcome to another edition of Extreme Championship Wrestling, live on Sci-Fi and what a way to kick off the show. The self proclaimed "Masterpiece" Chris Masters and obviously the crowd here in attendance doesn't think along the same lines as Masters does.
Tazz
And obviously the people in attendance and blind and stupid if they don't agree with "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters. Just look at the guy!! He is a real specimen and later on tonight he goes one on one against the Master of the 619, Rey Mysterio.
Joey Styles
Yeah, you brought up the person who Masters who will indeed be facing later on tonight, The firecracker known as Rey Mysterio, who came back to ECW last week and all he was out here for was to say hi to the fans but for some reason Chris Masters took it upon himself to interrupt and beat the hell out of the man!!
Tazz
Yeah but Mysterio goaded Masters into doing that. You have to remember it was Mysterio who told Chris to "Bring it on" so there you go. Mysterio should have let Masters have his say and no harm would have come to Rey.
Joey Styles
What the hell are you talking about Tazz?? Are you blind? You saw what happened last week and you are actually defending "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters? Oh my god! He made fun of Mysterio's size and I can't blame the guy for wanting to shut Masters mouth once and for all.
Chris Masters steps on the ramp and does his various taunts before walking to the ring with a smirk on his face and also he lifts his left arm up in the air and points it to the ceiling while the fans still boo the hell out of him. When Chris eventually reaches the foot of the ring, he turns left and walks up the steel steps and then he walks across the apron until he gets to the middle of it and then he steps in the ring. Masters then goes over to the other side of the ring and asks for a mic and after a moment Justin Roberts stands up and walks up the other steel steps and hands his mic to Chris Masters. Chris Masters clears his throat before raising the microphone and starts talking.
Chris Masters
How are you idiots doing tonight? Huh? Oh I am fantastic thanks for asking. I am on top of the world and couldn't be any better. You know after that match I had with Finlay, which I won of course, I heard some rambling from a certain someone called Rey Mysterio.
*The Crowd cheers for Rey Mysterio*
Chris Masters
Well, there's a surprise!! You dumba**es like the guy so that makes him a s*ckup to you idiots. Give me a break. Why would you cheer for a tiny little insignificant piece of crap!! Anyway as I was saying, after my match I heard the guy talking about how it was good to be back in ECW and I thought to myself "What the f*ck is this guy on about? He thinks it good to be in ECW? What a dumba**!." So then I decided to go and give him a piece of my mind and kick his sorry a**.
Joey Styles
Yeah, you beat a much smaller man than yourself, you good for nothing coward!! And you don't deserve to be in Extreme Championship Wrestling for one you idiot. At least Mysterio has respect for ECW unlike you because all you care about is yourself.
Tazz
And the award for the biggest moaning and complaining b*tch in all the WWE, goes to Joey Styles!!! Just shut up Styles, you are really p*ssing me off again, which you do every week. Just shut your cake hole and listen to "The Masterpiece" Chris Masters before I kick your sorry a** into the middle of next week!!
Chris Masters
Oh and he didn't like ii so he asked the General Manager for a match tonight, between the two of us. I am glad he did because it gives me a chance to put him out of ECW and end his pathetic career. And also put him out of his misery, so that he will never, ever think that he can take on"The Masterpiece" Chris Masters ever again. Oh yeah I have this piece of footage of last week proving my dominance over Rey Mysterio, for those who didn't see it last week. Roll the footage!!!
*The footage is shown of Mysterio going for the West Coast Pop and Masters ducking and cracking Rey in the leg with the Steel Chair. Then is shows Chris Masters picking Rey Mysterio up off his feet and locking in the Master Lock and throwing Mysterio to the mat. Lastly it shows Chris taunting Mysterio and talking trash to the man.*
Joey Styles
What a surprise, Masters didn't show the part where Rey Mysterio getting the upper hand but you wouldn't expect a man with this much arrogance and c*ckyness to actually show the footage.
Tazz
Look, all Masters is doing is proving a point to everyone in the back, in the Locker Room and everyone watching at home, all around the world. I wouldn't expect you to understand that Joey.
Chris Masters
Finally I would like to say I am not going to do The Master Lock challenge anymore because whats the point of it? No-one has and no-one ever will break the Master Lock so I am not wasting my time in even trying to so on that note. I say goodbye you pathtic losers because I have to get ready for my match.
Masters hands the mic back to Justin Roberts and climbs out of the ring and he heads backstage with the smirk back on his face and the crowd booing more than ever because of what Masters has just said and because they hate his guts and its not surprising that they do, who wouldn't?