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Post by william321 on Dec 30, 2007 10:02:40 GMT -5
Running Away by 3 Days Grace starts playing fans boo.
Announcer:From the Bowery, weighing in at 215 pounds he is the Emo Freakshow.
Ace:This man is obsessed with blood & violence a true student of CZW & ECW.
Ross:Yes, he comes out with a kendo stick here he comes just stay quiet.
Emo Freakshow enters the ring & awaits for JGH.
OOC:I pmed JGH about this match so its official.
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Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Dec 30, 2007 10:12:24 GMT -5
Always by Saliva then booms throughout the arena as JGH makes his way to the ring.
Kate
And introducing his opponent from Glenrothes, Fife, weighing 230 pounds JGH!!
Ace
Here comes JGH who accepted this match against the newcomer Emo Freakshow and you have to wonder if JGH is going to prove a point to everyone in the back by facing off against the newest guy on the roster.
Ross
Of course he will! JGH is one of the best and he is going to prove it tonight against Emo tonight! He showed some guts by challenging JGH tonight but I don't think he knows what he is in for tonight.
JGH walks out from the curtain and walks to the ring quickly. He slides in the ring and walks straight up to Freakshow and starts talking smack to him but Emo doesn't back down he just looks focused.
TBC Emo
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Post by william321 on Dec 30, 2007 10:23:01 GMT -5
Ace:Well Emo told me he's looking to prove himself look at that dropkick to the left, to the right, & a beautiful Pele kick
Ross: He goes for a figure 4 leg lock, oh the madness, he lets go he throws JGH to the turnbuckle climbs the ropes & has him in a pedigree position.
Ace & Ross:PEPSI PLUNGE!!!
OOC:JGH Tell me if i did anything wrong.
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Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Dec 30, 2007 10:28:33 GMT -5
OOC: You did a few things wrong man. One of them is not hitting the big moves at the start of the match, e.g the Pepsi Plunge, Pele kick. They should only be used near the end of a match. Another thing is that you shouldn't have one person hit every move while the opponent doesn't get a chance to hit anything. But other than that its ok.
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Post by william321 on Dec 30, 2007 10:31:27 GMT -5
OOC:okay how about this.
Ace:Emo Freakshow goes for a suplex & awaits for JGH to stand.
OOC:Like that?
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Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Dec 30, 2007 10:37:15 GMT -5
Yeah thats better but make sure when you are doing your match rp that its longer than a couple of sentences.
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Post by william321 on Dec 30, 2007 10:47:19 GMT -5
OOC:like how long like this
Ace:As JGH stands Emo gives him a Knee lift.
Ross:He picks up JGH gives him a drop toe hold into the turnbuckle
Ace:Emo picks him up gives him a piledriver.
Ross:He takes JGH to the outside close to the guard rail & gives him a russian legsweep.
Ace:Emo goes to the inside of the ring climbs the top rope.
Ace & Ross:Swanton!!!
OOC:is that okay?
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Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Dec 30, 2007 11:07:22 GMT -5
Not really because you're doing what you did before. You are hitting all the moves and I am not getting a chance to hit one. Look at past matches to show you the length of rp you should be writing.
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Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Dec 30, 2007 11:08:21 GMT -5
And also you have to make the match equal where we each connect with some moves.
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Post by william321 on Dec 30, 2007 11:23:30 GMT -5
Okay listen i'm sorry i got to go please don't take advantage let's continue some other time.
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Post by Greatest EWA World Champ JGH on Dec 30, 2007 11:25:26 GMT -5
Alright see you later
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Post by william321 on Dec 30, 2007 17:08:36 GMT -5
OCC:i'm back, so we have to make it equal.
Ace:JGH gives Emo an arm drag,Then Emo gives him a dropkick.
Ross:JGH gives Emo a suplex, Emo gives him a piledriver.
Ace:JGH hits Emo with an irish whip, Emo gives him a hurracanrana
Ross:JGH punches Emo, Emo punches JGH back.
Ace:Emo & JGH both go for a dropkick & miss.
OOC:like that?
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Post by T-Bone on Dec 30, 2007 20:28:01 GMT -5
Here is a good example of a good RP made by Scott Buster when he won the United States Championship. Take a look read it, and all that blah, ignore the replay BS that isn't nessacary ----------------------------------------- Ding Ding Ding Amazo tries to crawl away but Kratos grabs Amazo's leg and pulls him back. Kratos turns Amazo on his back and starts to pound on him wildly. Roberts and Buster both look at this hellacious beatdown unsure whether to get between them or just let Kratos work Amazo over. After a couple of seconds Buster slowly turns his head to Shane Roberts with a worried look on his face. Roberts turns his attention to Buster as well and a vicious smile appears on the big man's face while Buster's face shows a very worried look now. Roberts slowly walks over to Buster who looks to the left and the right but can't find a way out of the corner. Roberts attempts to grab him now but Buster ducks under Robert's arm and hits a dropkick against his back. Roberts falls against the ring post softly and turns around angrily.
Ace:
Did you see that? The Champ nearly didn't moved after that dropkick by Scott Buster!
Ross:
Well, Roberts weighs more than Buster and he is taller. While Roberts is a muscle man, Buster is a high flyer.
Ace:
He better thinks of something soon because with his usual moves he can't beat that 280 pounder.
Buster goes for another an Enzuigiri now but Robert's punches Buster with a straight right in the face before Buster could even start the move. Buster falls to the mat, holding his nose while Roberts looks a little bit bored now. The camera changes now to Amazo and Kratos and for some reason Amazo has Kratos' leg in his hands and twists it around, showing the Amazo lock.
Ace:
Amazo has did it again! Not even a 2 feet 7 bull like Kratos can hold the amazing one down. If Kratos taps then this match will be over!
Just in that moment you see Roberts big shoulders appear behind Amazo. The crowd boos and screams but it's too late. Shane Roberts grabs Amazo's right arm and pulls it off Kratos' ankle. Amazo turns around and stares Roberts in the eyes angrily but before he could do anything Roberts shows a high speed whip-in and Amazo crashes into one turnbuckles. The impact even hammers Amazo to the mat after that.
Ross:
Say what you want but this Shane Roberts is an animal!
Ace:
Indeed, it looks as if he would hold on to this US Championship for quite some time.
Ross:
Let's hope you are wrong.
Now Roberts looks down to Kratos who is about to stand up, holding his ankle in pain. As he sees Roberts he quickly gets up to full size and looks down to Roberts.
Ace:
Can you feel the intensity between this two human monsters? Kratos is the bigger man but Roberts is stronger. I wonder how this will turn out.
Roberts trash talks Kratos for a moment before they lock-up. The ring seems to crack down under the impact of the lock-up. Kratos pushes Roberts down on one knee with his size advantage. James Roberts stands right next to them and cheers on his brother. Suddenly Shane Roberts starts to roar loudly as he lifts up Kratos on his arms for a Military slam.
Ohhhhhhhhhhh
*SLAM*
Roberts, Buster and Amazo all jump up a little bit as Kratos hits the mat from over three feet. Now the camera changes to Buster and Amazo. Amazo still lays in the corner in which he got tossed by Roberts. Buster stands over him and after Kratos has landed on the mat he turns his attention back to Amazo and continues what he did before, he stomps the living hell out of the amazing one.
Ace:
The strength of Shane Roberts is simply amazing.
Ross:
Speaking of amazing Ace, Mister Amazo seems to be in trouble right there.
Buster now stops the insult and pulls Amazo to his feet. Buster loses no time as he whips Amazo across the ring. But instead of awaiting him back, Buster runs to the ropes next to the ones he whipped Amazo in. Amazo bounces off the ropes and runs across the ring to the other ropes. Buster himself runs to the ropes on the other side of where Amazo just has been.
Ace:
WOW! You can't do that with a normal ring!
As Amazo and Buster both bounce off the ropes for a third time Buster runs directly into Amazo's way and stops him from the side with a high speed flying forearm attack. The people start to cheer for that maneuver even though they stop quickly because Buster is an Monkey Tail. After the move Buster jumps up to his feet and shows the 'Phenomenal Taunt' with an arrogant smile into the camera.
Ross:
Wow, let's catch the replay of that maneuver. It was so fast I couldn't see what has happened.
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Back in the ring you see now Scott Buster on Amazo, pounding on him with hard knocks and Roberts standing over Kratos, stomping on him wildly. Then Buster and Roberts each take their opponents up. Roberts hooks both arms of Kratos and turns around to the middle of the ring where Scott Buster has Amazo locked in the same position. They stare at each other for a moment and then Roberts lets Kratos free and storms at Buster. Buster quickly tries to unhook Amazo but it's too late. Roberts dives off the ground and jumps at Buster with a clothesline over Amazo's back. Buster gets hit by it and the impact throws him out of the ring. Roberts jumps up and flexes his muscles to taunt the crowd who are cheering because Roberts has saved Amazo from getting hit by Buster's finisher.
Ace:
That was a close save for Amazo.
Ross:
Yep, he isn't at his best tonight.
Ace:
Amazo knows what he is doing. He just saves his power.
Ross:
Nah... I don't think so.
Now Roberts goes back to Kratos to go on where he left off. Amazo gets to his feet in the meantime and smirks at Roberts who shows his back to him. Amazo silently climbs up the turnbuckle and stalks Roberts up there. Amazo then yells Roberts' name. Roberts turns around and Amazo leaps off with a Missile Dropkick. Roberts puts his arms in front of him to save himself but there's no need to do that because out of nowhere Buster comes leaping from the side with a Missile Dropkick of his own right into Amazo's gut. Amazo and Buster both land on the mat hardly and Roberts just stares at them in disbelieve.
HOLY SH*T - HOLY SH*T - HOLY SH*T
Ace:
DID YOU SEE THAT?
Ross:
Hell, where did Buster come from?
Ace:
Let's check the reply.
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~ Replay ~
While Amazo stalks Roberts you see Buster from outside jump on
the apron and then onto the turnbuckle next to Amazo.
As Amazo leaps off Buster does the same
and the Buster hits Amazo with both legs in the gut.
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Ross:
THAT was phenomenal!
Ace:
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