SS vs RJ

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Ding Ding Ding

Ace: this match is official now! Ricky Jones vs Showstopper in a steel cage match!
Ross: you can pin,submit or escape from the cage to claim a victory.

Ricky Jones and Showstopper comes closer to each other and both men locks in. After quite long strength battle Showstopper wins it and grabs Ricky Jones head.

Ace: Ricky Jones is in tough position now!
Ross: Well Ricky Jones must escape from that headlock!

Ricky Jones tries to escape by hitting Showstopper with his elbow to his stomach,but Showstopper is way to much experienced than Ricky Jones and he avoids all the hits that Ricky Jones tries to hit.

Ace: Ricky Jones has to do something and fast if he is still looking to continue this match.
Ross: I think he should tap out,because everyone knows that Showstopper is going to win this match right? So why to lose energy... He could save that energy to defend his I.T tittle..
Ace: That kid want to fight that's all!
Ross: well i don't mind if he fight someone in his league,but he challenged Showstopper to face him in the steel cage match. And tonight we will see that he has more guts that brains Ace..

Ricky Jones desperately tries to escape with punches, but when he realizes that this is impossible he ducks and grabs Showstopper legs.

Ace: What is he going to do?

Ricky Jones lifts Showstopper and then slams him on the mat with all his weight.

Ross: he just used his power to escape that head lock!

Ricky Jones sits on the mat and shakes his head after that head lock,then he tries pinning maneuver

referee tries starts to count:

...1...
...2...
...thr...

Showstopper kicks out of the pin and Ricky Jones looks little disappointed.

Ross: he was really hoping to pin Showstopper after that move!? He is funny...
Ace: If there is anyone funny in this company it Bunny man believe me and this man is doing his best to be known to be a legend to be a champion!
Ross: But he will never be like Showstopper.... Never...
Ace: i don't know what will happen after week or month or after a year,but what i want to say that this kid knows how to fight!

Ricky Jones slowly stands up and helps Showstopper to stand by pulling his hairs,but Showstopper out of no were counters with low blow and Ricky Jones let him go and turns around in big pain after that impact.

Ace: the match just started and we already saw dirty play from Showstopper!
Ross: that had to hurt!

Showstopper stands up and smiles to the crowd.

[glow=red,2,300]BOOOOOO[/glow]

Showstopper walks closer and now he is standing behind of Ricky Jones. Showstopper grabs Ricky Jones neck and connects with neck snap.

[glow=red,2,300]BOOOOOO[/glow]

Ace: Crowd is not happy with Showstopper methods!
Ross: who cares! As long as Showstopper is famous and known and champ of course he don't need to be worry...

Showstopper then takes the cover and shows referee to start counting.

Referee starts the count:

...1...
...2...
....thr.... Ricky Jones gets his shoulder up last second.

[glow=red,2,300]Crowd starts to cheer again[/glow]

Ace: Close one,but Ricky Jones is still in the match!
Ross: Showstopper is playing with him, he don't want to injury young wrestler now that's a champion!

Showstopper doesn't look happy and tries to pin Ricky Jones again,but he kicks out of that one before referee starts the count.

Ace: Showstopper doesn't look happy and if you say he was playing with young Ricky Jones, now he is ready for serious battle!
Ross: Showstopper is dominating the match why he should waste his energy with that clown?
Ace: Hey you are disrespecting Ricky Jones!
Ross: well who does?

Showstopper grabs Ricky Jones and helps him stand up,then he looks at cheering crowd and shuts them by tossing Ricky Jones into the steel cage

Ace: What a viciousness we are seeing from our united world heavyweight champion Showstopper! He is not joking anymore!
Ross: Now everyone is little quite in the arena

Showstopper grabs Ricky's head and helps him stand again,then he does the same by tossing him into the steel cage.After that move Ricky Jones is bleeding and lays lifeless on the mat.

Ace: I can agree with you Ross everything is over now! Ricky Jones is bleeding and lays lifeless on the mat,but it seems Showstopper is not enough!

Showstopper puts his boot on Ricky's chest and shows referee to count.

[glow=red,2,300]Crowd:BOOO[/glow]

referee starts to count:
...1...
...2...
...thr.... Ricky Jones gets his shoulder up

Ace:unbelievable!
Ross: I don't know what this kid is thinking that he wants to continue this match!

Showstopper gets on his knees and grabs Ricky's head,then he starts to punch him with his fists. After ten punches Showstopper hooks Ricky's head an puts him into the pin.

referee starts to count as quickly as he can:

...1...
...2...
...thr.... Ricky Jones kicks out again from the pinning maneuver

Showstopper is really angry and crowd loves this

Ross: Ricky Jones is messing with the wrong guy!

Showstopper helps Ricky Jones to stand up and grabs his arm, then he tries to Irish whip him into corner,but Ricky Jones quickly climbs the turnbuckle and starts to escape the cage.

Ace: Whaaaaat? is he doing?
Ross: Showstopper catch him!

Showstopper looks amazed,but when he realizes that he can loose he runs to the corner and grabs Ricky's leg last second not letting him escape. Ricky Jones starts to kick Showstopper with his other leg,but Showstopper is still holding Ricky.

Ace: Can Showstopper stop Ricky Jones?

Showstopper manages to climb second turnbuckle and starts to punch Ricky Jones to the back and when it looks like that Showstopper is going to stop Ricky, Ricky out of no were hits the low blow to Showstopper with his leg. Showstopper after this hit falls from the turnbuckles and hits the mat.

Ace: C'mon Ricky escape from that cage!
Ross: Yeah yeah he will escape like a coward!

Ricky looks at cheering crowd and wonders what to do next... Try to hit lost diamond on Showstopper which is laying on the mat or just leave the ring and win the match.

TBC

[Booker T]

*Jones goes for the ‘Lost Diamond’, but The ShowStopper rolls through and pins him, grabbing the tights.*

Crowd:
One
Two

*The ShowStopper now puts his feet on the ropes, but it’s all legal in a Cage match.*

Three

Ding,ding, ding.

Kate: Your winner…The ShowStopper!

OOC: Pointers, since you obviously need them.

Ok, the beginning was decent but seemed rushed. Massive problem though was with the back suplex. There is no way in hell that anyone would almost get a three-count from the first back suplex of the match.

Don’t use “big pain”. It doesn’t make sense. Say something like “a lot of pain”. That might just be because of your English so I wouldn’t worry too much about that.

Now, MAJOR ISSUE!!! USE YOUR OPPONENTS MOVES!!!! Seriously, if I was judging a match, it wouldn’t matter if one guy put in an amazing RP but had his opponent use random moves and the other guy was mediocre but used proper moves. The mediocre guy would win, because tbh, that’s just disrespectful.

Again, you’re using too many false finishes. Only go close to 3 at the end of your post.

WTF?! You can barely kick out of a three count but then you can kickout at 0?

Use of blood was unnecessary, unbelievable and stupid. You just made yourself look weak. You need to learn how to work a gimmick match, which is quite complicated. Until then, stick to singles.

WTF?! You just got busted open, and then you can ignore an irish whip and climb up the cage?

Rest was decent.

Basically, you should have done a singles match since you don’t understand how to work a cage match. Don’t take that as an insult, since most people here can’t either. And these points might seem like your RP was bad, but it actually was better than I expected. You’ve at least taken some of my advice from before and are improving which is good.

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OOC: thx....next time add some colours

[Booker T]

lmao

[scottbuster]

there we see it. We can all help each other lol

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who let you say you're minds? shoooo

[scottbuster]

shut up thingy! ;D

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stroodle...

[scottbuster]

thingy

[scottbuster]

what? That is no bad word why can't I say PEN!S?

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shut up you phenomenal pu$$y

[scottbuster]

if you say something like that again you can suck my phenomenal pu$$y...... oh wait you know what I mean

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you just said that at last rites EWA womans championship will be defended in triple threth? you! Kandy and Torrie!

[scottbuster]

and what about the spelling bee contest of the third grade? I heared you would have made the fith place out of seven lol congratulations Ricky ;D

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shut up scott girl thingyter